Help with narrative

Need help with narrative for this:

Describe what you see and why it is a concern. Recommend repair and move on.

Floor beams visible in the crawlspace had inadequate bearing support at the splice joints. Good building practice dictates that beams splice joints should properly rest upon supporting structures (piers). I recommend correction by a qualified contractor.

From the InterNACHI narratives:

“In the crawlspace, girders supporting floor joists were improperly supported at splices. This condition is a structural concern. The Inspector recommends correction by a qualified contractor.”


I thinks Kentons structural concern addition is muy importante in this instance. The other narrative sounds like just any other narrative found in a report. Buyers need to know significance.