This home has a pair of spots with negative grading. I observed bags of sand, and loose sand in those locations - it appeared someone attempted to fix the grading issue.
How would you narrate this? The following is what I have written (but I don’t love it):
The home had areas of neutral or negative drainage that will route runoff from precipitation toward the foundation. Proper (positive) grading should move water away from the foundation and property. The inspector observed sand had been installed at these locations. Water is absorbed by, and penetrants, sand. The Inspector recommends re-grading these areas to improve drainage near the foundation and help reduce the risk of foundation damage. The ground should slope away from the home a minimum of 1/4-inch per foot for a distance of at least six feet from the foundation. The Inspector recommends correction by a qualified contractor.
Also, I noted the high efficiency furnace venting blocking egress from the basement window.